Sunday, June 27, 2010

At the Edge of the City

At the edge of the city
there are grasslands
where the sun lingers longest
at the end of the day.

I'd like to live there;
not in the blue-violet
shadows of the valley, but
at the edge of evening,

when golden strokes of
rich honey-light
lay like a blessing
over the sloping land.

3 comments:

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  2. i love love this. it makes me think about bruce road where everything ends in a field.
    i tried to pick out a favorite line but i like them all.. i promise i'll have more productive comments in the future haha

    p.s. i figured out how to do the blog thing yay!

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  3. YES that is the area I was thinking of! Haha and I'm glad you liked it, thank you.

    Yay, so glad we can actually do this now! :D

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