Saturday, February 5, 2011

Coffee Shop Romance

Young man
You asked me to watch your
Things and
I said sure and
Looked up and
My god you were cute

When you came back you said thanks and
We smiled at one another and
Our gazes lingered
Just a bit
I don’t think it was my imagination

We spent the next half hour or so
Jiggling our legs and
Shifting our bodies and
Sneaking glimpses
Of one another out of the corners of our
Eyes

You watched me type and
I watched you read and
We both pretended we were just as alone
As we had been before
You spoke

But of course now there was
You and
Now there was
Me and
I know you wanted to say something
But didn’t know how to
Start

So instead you just cleared
Your throat
Now and then and
I smiled at my computer screen and

I left when my tea and battery got low
Refusing to care
Whether you watched me as I walked
Out of the coffee shop and
Into the rain.

2 comments:

  1. If this is based on a real event, I am quite envious. This expresses the driving vision in my mind, every time I head to a public place, hoping to meet someone. If it is not based on any truth, you certainly wrote a piece that gets at the honest feelings underlying such a situation.

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  2. Yes, all of this is pretty much taken directly from experience, sitting in a coffee shop one day. I love writing about real life, daily life. It's where all the really interesting stuff happens, and I think what you felt about it shows how compelling it can be.

    I'm very glad you thought that, by the way, it makes me feel like I was really cutting to the heart of it. Because really, this is about something that DIDN'T happen, even though the facts are all real. So we can all sort of relate. Which is really what we want to do with poetry: write something from our own lives that everyone else can relate to. :)

    Why do I always write so much? xD

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